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RE: UNDEAD

in #finishthestory6 years ago (edited)

Who would have ever imagined an army of zombies! This is the beauty of the contest... each participant's mind finds unexpected ideas and universes.

he screamed monotonously when he saw the face of his assailant

I tried for some minutes to figure out how to scream monotonously :-P

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Lol, maybe you should look the word monotonously in the dictionary and try again.i wish i could show you how it's done.

Thanks @bananafish, am honored to have you visit my blog.

Maybe not and I'm not illiterate so, please, avoid inviting me to read a dictionary: it's a bit rude, don't you think? However..for the sake of a copy paste..Definition of monotonous. 1 : uttered or sounded in one unvarying tone : marked by a sameness of pitch and intensity. 2 : tediously uniform or unvarying. Should a scream for surprise and terror be described as monotonous? Even if you used it in the first meaning, still it is totally lacking in pathos.

Am so sorry @bananafish, i didn't mean it to sound as such. Yea, monotonously isn't a perfect word to use in that context but however i have tried picturing how it really sounds to scream monotonously but maybe i found a way to scream monotonously or not i can't say or maybe saying i can show you how it is done is a bluff, i can't say but i know that you are one of those that spend time to read and understand a story and you pointed out something that i knew was most probably out of context.

Am really sorry for even mentioning a dictionary, i really don't know what i was thinking at that time.

Saying it is an honor having you on my blog still stands and i appreciate your effort. I do hope you forgive my misstatement. Thanks @bananafish, i really do hope that you will not give up on helping me become a better writer.

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