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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #31 | What goes around, comes around

in #finishthestory6 years ago

" he whispers to the professor "You were wrong." and he smiled that he finally said it all these years to his face."

Very fine kicker. You closed it with elegance after a well built moment of existential musings. I like the contrast between the professor, stuck in his academic world made of abuses, and Luke who evolved in time - not without sacrifices and a submission to the status quo - showing compassion and the capability to break the vicious circle of power.

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