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RE: Pointy Eyes Shine In The Dark [my entry to Finish the Story #52

in #finishthestory5 years ago (edited)

A cheeky take on Kurt losing his nerve, nice Vasigo! The anxiety and fear shook him, to the point of loosening his bowels takes his character far from the proud musician he was in the beginning. Well done with Machete who, despite using a drum stick as a tongue depressor, was able to successfully help him through an unorthodox treatment. Nothing like the reminder of those adoring fans to boost one's confidence. 😂

Your portrayal of Machete's character was spot on to previous Tortillas stories. Him sliding in as Kurt's replacement using the contract and then speeding off was hilarious. This was a fun read!

~Bris

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