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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #34: An Entry by Michaias
It's funny how they all wanted to kill the same woman at the same time hoping to get to her money. Well, I think also a little bit because she wasn't very pleasant :)
It would be nice to know which one was successful at the end :D I love how you turned the story around the donation and bitcoin. And that Elisha is the one who will get the money :D He deserves it for those racism from Brigitta :)
Thank you for sharing! It's a great ending of the story :)
Thank you! In the original version, I had Elisha tell the officers they would have to do some digging to figure out who was technically responsible for the murder. That leaves open the possibility that the others are only guilty of attempted homicide and not actual homicide. I had to cut that bit, though. I wanted to get it closer to 500 words.