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RE: Hasta la Muerte: Finish the Story #28

in #finishthestory6 years ago (edited)

This lady is terrifying. First we see her leading her men into battle and executing an assassin. Then we glimpse her history and motives and begin to relate to her a bit. Finally we see an aspect of her that's monstrous and nearly impossible to relate to. Her cold, methodical professionalism (which is scary in its own right) gives way to a feverish sadism and bloodlust. The transformation feels very organic, and that final scene hits hard. Yikes! :O And fanatastic work! :D

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Thank you so much for high praise! We had quite a character this week didn't we? See you next week, I hope.

Definitely! :) I’m looking forward to the next one.

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