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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #24 - Life Dealer
Great read! I love the details in the intro about the different drugs he uses and the way they effect him, and that final scene hits hard. It says a lot that dying broken and alone on the pavement feels like a blessed escape from the rest of his life.
Yes that final scene as his life blood escaped from his body and pool around him was an image that I wanted to capture on how life was so absurd.
He was constantly trying to escape and so life finally dealt him the hand he wanted.