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RE: Lucid Dream - Finish the Story Entry for Week #37
So, mercy had been given.
The story can now take place another round on Legia Six. Yoh became a God like the other Gods and Goddesses we know from ancient history and myths. Sending us dreams maybe not all wanting us to wake up ;-)
In the beginning I just briefly thought "Ah... , now comes the one scene where a truly skilled meditator can fight the force", as it is known from masters not to lose control over body and mind. But then you led me into a total other direction which I did not see coming.
And why not flowers made of sandwhiches smelling of mustard. Another planet: another lifestyle.
Have a Good Friday night, dear @brisby.
You're right, why not? Have a good week-end Erika 😉
Thank you, Erika!
I keep re-reading this. Such an elegant way to put it.🌻
To know that I surprised you with the direction of the story has put a big cheesy grin on my face. Even as I'm typing this reply.----->😁 (me).
I suppose my ending shows how much of an optimist I am. 😁 (And how being hungry transfers to my writing.) Thanks as well for the, "Why not.." I figured if there are infinite worlds, anything could be possible.
I hope that your weekend has been treating you well and that you have a great Sunday!🤗
I am with you when it comes to be optimistic and not stick too much to the "doom"-mood. Writing and reading stories sometimes causes me having an edge-feeling and becoming all emotional.
For this reason I very much liked the novel "The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy". There, the author understood it brilliantly not to take life & the universe too seriously. The sandwich flower reminded me a bit on it. As Douglas Adams put the most ridiculous ideas to his chapters. I think he was giggling also when he put his ideas into words.
My weekend was relaxing. I hope yours too. And the rest of the Sunday.
Greetings!