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RE: Hasta la Muerte: Finish the Story #28
Now this is a polished story telling of revenge and blood lust.
Having a strong character express her emotions and motivations. An eye for an eye is not enough as she wanted to completely destroy those that took away Yayo Che from her.
Thank you! Something about the character, the way @theironfelix suggested her, struck a chord. People can be filled with passion so that it blinds them to reason. That's how I saw this woman. I'm glad I was able to show that.