@agmoore I can’t say anymore because @erh.germany stole the words from my mouth. You gave the feeling of “you too have known pain and you hope hatred might replace the pain! But it never goes away!” Resteem’d and upvot’d!
Thank you. I have to admit I at first went for a weaker version, but cleaned it up--worth the effort. You gave us a powerful character, a rich backstory. Much to work with.
Yes, @erh.germany did write a straightforward, insightful response. She's always a valuable critic. Good to have around finishthestory :)
Thank you. I have to admit I at first went for a weaker version, but cleaned it up--worth the effort. You gave us a powerful character, a rich backstory. Much to work with.
Yes, @erh.germany did write a straightforward, insightful response. She's always a valuable critic. Good to have around finishthestory :)
Well, it had worked all the better that you improved upon the weaker version to make this one.