Okay now can I #comment and now be late to the commenting game... which I already am as the great flock of commenters came and go... great... Uhhhhhhh! LET'S MAKE A COMMENT!~

La filosofía (The philosophy): I like to quote the end blurb you made and just say you just stole my job here. Okay on a less serious note, you very much continued the feeling of displaced people of the same constitutionality. A random term I just made up on the spot to describe people who might as well be the same people but are two separate bodies. (And no random passerby anon, different topic to people who are "dual-spirited"/two-spirit in terms of gender and the topic of "finding the other them" in the world.) Heck, this even applies to Elise (even though the "elderly" Elise died) and only does the obscenity of their connection despite the age-gap feel there. When it the past chunks of paragraphs (okay is there an official word for "group of paragraphs") it mainly was an underlying tension that built up steam but nobody could be sure if the water was bubbling under the tea-pot as well. Yet hundred more words and I bet I get to see where the old man frowns after putting more thought. However, cannot and will not confirm nor deny if they are the same or not; hopefully mój Ukochany, @calluna, follows suit as she pretty much torched my head until I saw the genius in blurring character relations. (And this was our coprompt if anybody took to notice how the contest page had worded things, wonder what the hell happened in translation at this end but bleh) :p

La forma (The form): To #hashtagsteal a comment of @f3nix's about removing a sentence, hopefully the line with "as he looked at the younger version of his wife" had been modified or deleted. To #hashtagstealagain a comment but from @calluna, this line also made so giddy on you trying to hypothesize a scenario where Matt = elderly man and Elise = elderly woman. But here do I think the memory aspect can lend extremely well to the potential of manipulating matter to get back to an early point. (I don't think mój Ukochany is denying this but suggesting it lends more to a remembrance story.) Whatever may be the true intent of the dialog between them, I shall never reveal (neither @calluna!); mwahahahaha!~ :D :D!!!!~