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RE: Wild West - Chapter 8 - Part 7 - 5 minute freewrite challenge
Sweet of Tom to say that to James but, seriously? That's an invitation to fate for something to go wrong. Like in movies when a police officer starts bragging that he only has "two days until retirement". You know then and there that he's probably a goner. James' reaction was perfect to his character by the way.
Indeed. It's like the rock that's slightly lighter colored than the rest of them in the cartoons... You instantly know that one's about to get moved!
Thanks! That means a lot to me! :D