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RE: Going Home

in #freewrite5 years ago

As always, so many riveting lines and lyrical prose! This opening line is powerful, simple, eloquent:
I am walking to the station to catch a train that will take me home.
and this: I wonder if Maria would still be alive....I don't relish returning home but the letter in my pocket burns with Maria's plea for help. I love the details of what's in all her pockets.
We need a Part 3!!!

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I can't take credit for line one, it's part of @mariannewest 3 prompts, but thank you so much ❤ @carolkean

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