I haven't read a story about mythology in a long time. It's so refreshing!

I can feel the pain of the woman. She was innocent and punished for something she didn't know. Sitting in the corner, she can't even cry anymore.

They were greedy and wanted that box to be opened. Now it doesn't matter anymore. She is being kicked in her stomach - what a horrible thing to do. There is so much cruelty in your story.

But at the end, the tiny creature and its eyes.. there is hope for the future. It's all going to be good 😊

Great freewrite! I liked it! I like when there is a positive moment in stories 😉