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I didn't see that coming! And from the looks of it, he's not all that great at commitment either. Thanks for finishing the story!
I didn't see that coming! And from the looks of it, he's not all that great at commitment either. Thanks for finishing the story!
Thanks for the comment - you made me realize I didn't intend for him to be a cheating kind of guy, just a guy with an eye for a good looking woman, so I've revised with your input in mind. Readers matter! I value everyone's input.
I liked the revised version. Derril has a lot more depth now!
I have you to thank for that! (And for the prompt!)