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goastrighter (47)in #freewrite • 6 years ago (edited)

I know there is something real.
I know, that whatever it is,
It is elusive.
I know there is reason,
Although it is hardly logical, and very far from common sense.
I know..... There is very little I can say that I know.
And that slight bit is near impossible to describe;
To pin down and build on.
Yet I feel,
It is the only thing that allows for any development at all.

Written for today's Five Minute Freewrite.

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6 years ago in #freewrite by goastrighter (47)

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aislingcronin (60) 6 years ago

How beautiful and poignant this little reflection is ... it's short, but powerful. It's evoked a few different emotions within me that are difficult to explain. 🤔 Thank you for writing this. ❤

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goastrighter (47) 6 years ago (edited)

Wow, that's a great compliment. Thank You for the vote and re-steem..

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scribblingramma (63) 5 years ago

When I read this, it made me think of "A Puzzlement", one of the songs from the musical "The King and I." Sometimes what we think we know, we find out we don't!

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goastrighter (47) 5 years ago (edited)

"Sometimes what we think we know, we find out we don't!"

I can definitely relate with that! I'll have to check that song out. Thanks!

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mariannewest (71) 5 years ago

It is elusive - but it is our core. Love how you brought this piece together - short but powerful.

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goastrighter (47) 5 years ago

"It is elusive - but it is our core."

Ha, yes. That's exactly what I was trying to get at.. That was just about five minutes for me, and I edited a little. If I really went to work on it, who knows what would become? Freewriting is at once frustrating and very interesting/rewarding. Like: "I can do that? Just like that, and leave it. Really?" Thank you.

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