jumps on the bed...grabs a piece of pizza...says hello to the doggos...turns off the tv and launches into conversation that could easily last for hours

Yes, keep writing. You do well with it. I liked your opening, the pizza drew me in. The title made me go hmmm. What thoughts is he having in bed? Oh, NFL. Meh. DTube, sure, but please give me a youtube video in the post too, pretty please, because country internet. It would be great to see your face. That said, often I'd rather read words. But then, I love words. I should be doing things with words in my manuscript right now, actually.

takes another piece of pizza...saunters out the door blowing a kiss behind her