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RE: She of all the gifts (Five minutes freewrite)

in #freewrite5 years ago

Wonderful story of fiction that can have real life lesson! I have heard several times about Pandora's box though I haven't really read the story in detail. In general, it is something like this wherein the box of evil was opened.

The world seems unfair for the woman in your story which can sometimes happen in reality. People tend to be overwhelmed by emotions that no one is thinking rational anymore. What I like about your story is that little creature that shines a ray of hope for something good. The world is not drowned with evil after all.

You did very good in wrting this one. The title says five minute freewrite. I wonder if you really came up with the story in such a short time?

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