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RE: "Her Well Being" | We-Write! I write...You write!
Nice turn around. However, I noticed you seemed to mix up your character at some point. Or is it me that didn't get something?
""Uh... thanks." Kyle wondered if she flirted this much with all men or if he was target practice, or what."
I think from that point what seems like Derril was intended was instead replaced by Kyle. Easy pissy fix, I suppose.
I loved reading it.
Ohhh man, the name thing. THANK YOU. At least I always call my husband "Tim." :)
Thanks for the kind words!