The Seed. A Poėtric Saga Part 1

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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The Seed.
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I
It grew in the dark.It grew in the night.
It grew and it grew and it grew into life.
It saw itself shine.It saw itself shadow.
Like all that It saw was all of it's mellow.
It self in it's start.It self in it's end.
It's self as the inventor destroying each event. It didn't want to see that. It didn't know how to believe it.Be leaving it, be free from it. Be all with it's nottingness.
Feel lost in it's hollynes. The glory was told. But it couldn't believe in it.
But growing it did. But only within.
So that became the story that started
It's end.

For long it did nothing.At short it got everything. It grew and it grew, it grew into someting. And there it remained.
Without it be named. Before it could change but changed??
Yes it changed...

II
The colours came first. To fill up the mass. A pigment of black with purple and red. And then came the bones
Like rock a mile stones. Like rock a bey baby it started to grow.It started to feel
It started to vaint. It still would not feel the start of the pain.The heart of the game
The darkside of shame.The feeling trough feelings trough feelings.Insain

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III
So there it began. What had it begotten?
The future was cold the silence was sudden.Because now it was rotten.
Because now it was pure.Because now it understood it was ment to be cured.
Ment to be poison. Cloaked as a medicine. Spoken as adreline.
Took like an aspirine. Used as a aspirint.
Abused but magnificent. Confused and oblivious.

The story was told. But still it stood still. Yes still it rebelled to come back into hell.

IV
It self it self. It wasn't itself.
It would not take self it said to it self.
So it started a war. A war with itself.
A war of the soul to resolve in it itself.
So it would evolve in itself
it started to fall in love with itself so now it
was lost inside of itself...

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that's all for now folks. I hope you like the story. If you like to read more leave me a message.
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other poetry and fiction stories I posted
https://steemit.com/writing/@mrgranville/poetry-called-saved-original-poem-afd891bfc592

https://steemit.com/nl/@mrgranville/gedwongen-liefde-7f5a5d7a2d77b

https://steemit.com/english/@mrgranville/forced-love-1-1-a-valentines-steemscript-6ba707951ef2

https://steemit.com/constrainedwriting/@mrgranville/i-know-where-you-are-constrained-writing-contest-19-e39adf376337e

https://steemit.com/writing/@mrgranville/darkside-of-love-episode-3-5e5d2dea06513

https://steemit.com/writing/@mrgranville/the-darkside-of-love-episode-2-514f12a04466e

https://steemit.com/writing/@mrgranville/the-darkside-of-love-a-steemit-novel-9a894930d36fd

If you like one of them and you want to upvote my work I suggest you upvote one of my newest posts

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Who you might consider following for nice writing and inspiration are @svashta @warpedpoetic @adamkokesh @justynatina @nymia.aryn @adsactly @clixmoney @jerrybanfield @therealwolf and many more.
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Thank you 😜😜😜 for mentioning me in your post it's very sweet of you 🤗🤗
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You are most welcome my friend.
Hope you like my poem too?
Do let me know what you think about it if you can.

Sorry I should say also how I enjoyed reading your poem. Very intensive for me. But I like it. I wait for more. 👏👏

Thank you very much and you don't have to say sorry for that. I am allready glad you took the time to come and respond. So thanx again and yes I will wrote soon more☺

You are most welcome. Like I said before I will support you, and all who are kind to me also in any way I can. Cause alone we are just fish but togetter we can be whales.

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