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RE: FreeWrite - Prompt: Freedom (took longer than five minutes)

in #freewrite6 years ago

What a beautiful story, with an open ended ending. I am as curious as the main character here who keeps wondering why was she chosen by the man, however I am also wondering why would she accept him when he didn't even tell her the reason.
                       
In any case, it is an engaging story and keeps me entertained until the end.
                       
Congratulations for your curie vote, tin tin ^_^.

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Thank you for reading(=^_^=)

Hmm, about the main character. The guy loves her not because of her looks, it's something else that drew him to her. After all, they've known eah other way before they were together, so he knows her quite a bit.

And as for her, she had loved him for years, so she accepted him despite of her doubts. But that didn't mean that they weren't around, her doubts, that is. Actually they grew more, because she knew that he was a great guy and she was just average.

In a way,letting go of him was freedom from the burdens weighing down her mind about their love. To her, she didn't need to worry anymore about whether they were compatible or not, or if they were a match.

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