Hello there! First I want to thank you again for accepting work that is a bit older for this contest. I love reviving the old stuff. When I put them here, it feels like they have been downright resurrected.
Here is a weekend freewrite.
https://steemit.com/weekendfreewrite/@owasco/the-weekend-freewrite-4-6-2019-part-3-the-dramatic-twist