Haiku Saturday, Round 4

From the blog that brought you Friday Poets and then Dead Poem's Society, now it is time to get really precious and claim the weekend in the name of brief verse.

Yep, it's Saturday; so let's haiku.

It's round four and slowly but surely #haikusaturday and #poetryweekend are growing. Yes this is a contest but primarily it is a community growing and enriching event. Depending on the size of the SBD payout, I'll reward everyone who takes part and follows the rules. So please read and follow the rules.

In brief, upvote this post yes, drop a link yes, but also reesteem and vote for at least one other person in the comments and comment.I noticed when you don't. Come on folks ... there is no I in poetry.

The Rules for Participation.

• UPVOTE and REESTEEM this post. The more people who get involved the bigger the payout and the more I can reward the participants.
• Put @prydefoltz in your title and one of your tags should be #haikusaturday
• Write a haiku post and drop the link in the comments below. The haiku needs to have been posted on Saturday wherever you are. Why? Because it is Haiku Saturday, don't you know?
• Visit at least three other haiku and comment and upvote their COMMENT here. You can also upvote their post if you got the upvote power but it is not necessary. Your votes will decide the winners.
• Wrote a haiku for another contest or challenge today; feel free to post it here too. I'm not possessive.
• The liquid payout from this post (SBD) will be split up among the winners (those who received the most upvotes) and the most supportive participants, those who upvoted and commented the most. Get to know each other. I may write a haiku and join in on the fun, but obviously I will not qualify to share in the SBD payout.
  

Never written a haiku before. Start with the basic form. A three lined poem of the syllable count of 5/7/5 about nature. From there start to experiment with pivot lines and pivotal ideas. Want some help writing haiku, this may be the place to get it. In your comment indicate you would like critique and I am sure a more experienced haiku writer will help you out. I have written hundreds of them and I am happy to take a look. But please, no insistence that your haiku way is the right way. Be gentle and humble when you attempt to teach. This is English haiku after all andthere is room for variation. Senryu, hokku, and tanka is also welcome. I am no stickler for 5/7/5 but haiku should be brief and generally run less than 17 syllables in total. With tanka you get two more lines of 7 syllables each.
I will upvote and comment, to the best of my ability, on everyone who takes part having followed the rules. I should be able to get to everyone within the week. So that will be two upvotes: one for your comment and one for your post. I will do my best to make sure the upvote is over the burn-off level. Any comment or post that does not receive at least a three cent payout, receives no payout. Many of you may not know this.I really want to see the poetry community grow on steemit, not just in numbers but also in our wallets. If we are to make this happen, we have support each other. I love Japanese-inspied poetry and I am so excited to see what everyone comes up with.

Last week payouts of SBD

@liverussian 0.2
@calluna 0.2
@satored 0.2
@pedroelec 0.06

Now can you describe a scene with what it isn't and all in one breath. Oh yeah ... let's haiku:)