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RE: Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest - Week #05 - @bananafish
Your haiku takes us on a poignant journey. You've sandwiched the summer fun tree house between the cold of winter and dilapidation. An interesting contrast that suggests loss and the passage of time to me.
You got it!
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