Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5

in #haikucontest6 years ago (edited)

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箱庭に病葉落ちて大いなり

hakoniwa ni byōyō ochite ōinari

--

in the small garden

a fallen withered leaf

becomes big… too much…

Haiku by Tomiyasu Fūsei (1885-1979)


The poetry contest of Bananafish!


2 STEEM and 2 @steembasicincome shares given weekly!


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Best haiku award: n. 2 STEEM

Popular choice award: n. 1 steembasicincome share

Best vote comment: n. 1 steembasicincome share

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For those that want to unleash their poetic potential, here is how this contest works:


• Look at the prompt image and let yourself be inspired by it.

• Write a haiku related to the prompt image. The haiku should be composed by 3 verses with no title. The 1st verse should be 5 syllables long, the 2nd verse should be 7 syllables long, and the 3rd verse should be 5 syllables long again.

• If you aren’t confident with English enough, you can write your haiku in Spanish, French, or Italian as well. Only remember, if you write in languages different from English, please include an English translation for other readers.

• Post the haiku on your blog or in the comment section below this post. If you make your own post, don’t forget to put the link to it in the comment section below!


Don't forget to use the tag:


#haikucontest



Watch out for the @bananafish comment to this post, under which you can cast your vote (and try to win the Best Comment award)


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Prompt Image:



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[photo credit: @marcoriccardi]

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Do you want to know how we evaluate the submitted haiku? These are the characteristics we search for:

• Kireji (切れ字), a cut between the 1st and the 2nd verses, or between the 2nd and the 3rd; the cut can be grammatical, as a sign of punctuation, or it can be a cut in the meaning, like two different images.

• Kigo (季語), an explicit or implicit reference to a season, that defines the time of the year in which the haiku is composed or referred to.

• Sabi (寂), the sense of the inexorable passage of time, the beauty or serenity that accompanies the advance of age, when the life of the objects and its impermanence are highlighted by patina and wear or by any visible repairs.

• Wabi (侘寂), the taste for frugal and natural things, rustic simplicity, freshness or silence; it can be applied to both natural and artificial objects, or even non-ostentatious elegance.

• Mono no aware (物の哀れ), empathy with nature and human life; the "feeling of things", nostalgia, regret for the passing of time, understanding of the changeability and of the transience without suffering.

• Yūgen (幽玄), sense of wonder and mystery; it represents the state of mind produced by the inexplicable fascination of things, the feeling of an 'other' universe, full of mysterious unity.

• Karumi (軽み), beauty in simplicity; poetic beauty reflected in its simplicity, free from preconceptions and moral judgment.

• Shiori (しおり), gentleness; the levity and the delicate charm that radiates from the verses, where things are evoked in the reader without aggressiveness or excessive explicitness.

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Submission deadline: Wednesday 17h October, 11:59 PM, GMT -7 (Pacific Daylight Time).

The results will be out on Thursday 18th October, 1:00 PM, GMT -7 (Pacific Daylight Time).


Your autumnal bananafish

@marcoriccardi

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This is a promising model, which rewards quality based on a decentralised consensus protocol… what does it mean? You can submit worthy posts to the @co-in platform and hopefully this will result in some interesting upvotes for the author. Many submission to Mizu No Oto and Finish the Story contests have already received upvotes from Co-In.

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GOOD LUCK, BRAVE HAIKU POETS!


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Sun still casting shades
The tree has grown a little
Childhood long past gone

Thank you for your participation! Poignant notalgia in this beautiful haiku :)

I like the suggestion of growth and change, while some things stay the same: The sun still casting shadows. We move on...and leave behind signs. But life goes on.

Este ejercicio me gustó mucho. Presenta una visión de la naturaleza tocada por una conciencia que percibe la permanencia y la variación en la vida.

Lovely! I enjoyed your comparison of what time has done for the tree vs the child.

Ladder to escape,
Rough brick to support the home,
Treetop wonderland.

Welcome to Mizu No Oto contest! Thank you for your haiku! I hope to read more posts from you, I know it's hard time for beginners on Steemit, but we, Bananafish Tribe, are a supportive family ;)

(Marco)

Lovely sentiment, beautifully expressed.

I liked this, especially "treetop wonderland"! That's the beauty of a tree fort, isn't it? It could be anything to anyone. :^)

Swing. Swinging hammock
House above for tiny feet
Screaming, laughing, play

I like the way you suggest a lullaby or a nursery rhyme! Almost onomatopoeic, I love it! Onomatopoeia in haiku is frequently used ;)

(Marco)

Great description of the moment! You made me think of a peaceful moment, just relaxing in the hammock while my little monkeys have themselves a ball!

Vote and comment your favorite haiku

My vote goes to @brisby :) ~ such lovely imagery!

Aww! Thanks for the compliment Kaelci! 😁

I vote for @manoldonchev's. I especially liked the juxtaposition of the sun, the tree and the person: the descriptions make a gradual transition between what does not change and what does.

Thanks you, @gwilberiol, @bananafish and @agmoore for your kind words!

I vote @felixgarciap because of the smooth flight into the realm of the giant.

Thank you very much dear friend @manoldonchev. Greetings

Voto por el haiku de @josemalavem. Me gustó mucho la imagen protectora del árbol, el último verso es especial: sugiere mucha paz y amor.

@caitlineileenm is the one I'm going with. It made me small and I the words used created a nice picture in my mind.

My vote this time around is for @gwilberiol. :)

My vote is for @gwilberiol.

Voto por @arehany. Ya le había escrito en su entrada aquí: "Este me parece uno de los mejores ejercicios concursantes. Más allá de la exactitud o no del número de sílabas, percibo el espíritu de un buen haiku por su belleza sencilla, apacible y sugerente."

This picture evokes so many thoughts. Tree house especially. Lovely shot.

My haiku, offered with respect:

Shadows cover grass
Leaves embrace weathered treehouse
Summer afternoon

I love this!

That's really appreciated. I'm learning haiku here... what gentle place to learn a gentle art.

Thank you for your haiku! You included a nice kigo. I'm happy you liked the shot, I was walking in Cortina with my girlfriend and I saw this glimpse of a private garden. It isn't perfectly balanced or in focus, but it's a snapshot ;)
(Marco)

I'm not a photographer, but if a photo moves me, it's good. This one was very moving. Thanks for the compliment. Your guide on haiku was informative, and helpful. I tried to stay true to that guide.

If only this was a post I would upvote AND resteem. Anyways, beatiful word image yah got there. So I shall do my best and just upvote and reply.

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I just put up finish the story so I didn't want to have two small posts in a row. I love this environment. It is one of the nicest places on Steemit. Thanks for the words of praise.

Dang, yah should’ve included the haiku with yer finishthestory post.

I'm not very clever at negotiating the platform :) Just write, comment, vote and blog. Thanks for the advice.

I almost touched on the grass as well except with the wind. Couldn't make it work the way I wanted.

I like your second line.

Thank you. My brothers built a tree house when I was young. They were very particular about letting "the girls" up there, so I didn't get to go in much. This house brought back memories.

Your haiku is so serene! (She shouts with an exclamation point...) 😁

Here be me entry for this contest.

I'm responding to your haiku here because I responded to the story in your link:
You focus on the residual joy from childhood in the picture, while some of us felt more a sense of nostalgia. An interesting, personal perspective, expressed well.

UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for reading! Glad yah caught that shine in time, let's see the Mizu No Oto results on Friday!
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Well, I’ll give it a try:

A house in the skies
won’t fall like autumn leaves
it is eternal

Nice poem! You're right, the memories will live on. :)

A good try, I can say! ;)
Welcome to the Mizu No Oto contest!



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I like it. Now this is something beyond the ordinary.

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