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RE: Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest - Week #01 - @bananafish
After the kireji, the third verse makes the exterior rain the mirror of the internal melancholy, in a circular sense. Bravo!
After the kireji, the third verse makes the exterior rain the mirror of the internal melancholy, in a circular sense. Bravo!
Thanks. Paid attention to the list and did my best to incorporate some elements mentioned.
The list completely went south when I interpreted natural as raw. The seduction of pure angst won again.
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