I love the concept here, encountering a character who is your D&D persona but yet is their thinking person makes for a great premise. The tone of address works perfectly, the side notes early on create this casual sense of ease between author and reader which adds so much. There is such a sheer depth of imagination in the plot, the things Telek shows him, the idea that that lines aren't so clean cut, and I do love the evil is a subjective perspective. A thoroughly enjoyable entry! Thank you very much.

The winners of round 11 have been announced and round 12 is out - very much hope to see you there!