This is a hair raising ending! You tie it up so well, it feels like a complete story. You just totally had me at this bit:
And the Queen watched.
From the mouth of her tent she watched.
Words that say so much more than is written. I think I honestly prefer your version of these two characters <3
Thanks.😌
But that love story you spun is way more beautiful.
And many many thanks for the tipu vote. It's a pleasant surprise.😍😍