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RE: The Harbingers (Halloween Horror Entry - Horror - Reader Discretion Advised)
Granguignolesque! Now I understand your comment about Grace, Cal, we should make them meet :-P
I think that what I liked the most was the narration point of view of a third person very close to your protagonist. The final climax was also so vivid!
breaking apart like the juicy jewels in an orange segment
This and many other similes and descriptions are true gems in your most authentic style.