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RE: Nessuno mai canta l'attesa - A chant of forgotten wait [ITA-ENG]
Your descriptions of the taut grip of anticipation before the coming battle, from the lovely fingers of the dawn , the belt, and the steel wire closing in, cutting in, caught and held me. Then the breaking free of the grasp, not caring for having empty glory, just the thoughts of beautiful love...simply fantastic F3nix! tip!
Now I make you laugh: this was originally meant to be a NSFW story talking about all this sweaty warriors inside the belly of the Trojan Horse with a lot of time to spend together and nothing to do.. other than..well...that. You know, in the ancient greek times they were quite open minded (look at some representations on ancient vases for instance) :-PpP Thank you for the tippy tip cara!