Jazz Hit - A Song by Another Poet

in #lyrics6 years ago (edited)

Intro

In the late 2016's an still a lot goin on out here it seems...

I send this message for you all hope you're living your dreams and end of suffering for humanity please believe...

Chorus

Ya know it’s a jazz hit on a jazz tip.

Some of those old hits were the baddest.

They had sax the trombone and a bit of that magic.

An ya knew it when ya heard it just for what it was.

It was a jazz hit on a jazz tip.

Verse

Cause what we want in life can be made by design...

So read between the lines of this rhyme and you will find that anythings possible...

And in due time... What you want will be yours...

It was just a subtle change in perspective and attitude
a change in course which positively...

Could put us on a new tangent...

Hurts too deep hence the hesitation and reluctance to try to comprehend

For far too long we have chosen to deny...

Are we livin a life? Or are we livin a lie?

In a persuit of paradise all we have are paradoxes...

Inspect the motives of why OJ Simpson got Johnny boy Cockrin to represent em...

All of us may be guilty or just refuse to believe it...

I’m so sorry your honor I just don’t agree with the verdict.

And it went down as the gavel hit and the consquences of our actions that laid beneath it...

They say we’re guilty til proven innocent and born in the land of the free or we’re too ignorant to see still choose to believe born a slave into something we never could see...

But would you ever be compelled to help someone else?

In their time of darkness and misery.

There may be hope for us yet with an idea like that!

And believe me its doing a world a good for a world that so desperately needs it...

In our time of need we’ll look around and see who stuck around there may be regrets that abound but maybe not guess it all depends on how it goes down...

Chorus

Ya know it’s a jazz hit on a jazz tip.

Some of those old hits were the baddest.

They had sax the trombone and a bit of that magic.

An ya knew it when ya heard it just for what it was.

It was a jazz hit on a jazz tip.

Author's Notes

This is a short song I wrote and performed in a small solo project. I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!

Thanks,
Another Poet

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Man I really love all your songs. You have spirit and a lust for life and it pours into your art. Thank you for sharing your ideas through your talent.

yeah that was cool. It would be good to hear it performed.... even just a rough recording...?

Check it out! 3buntu.bandcamp.com

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