This is packed full of meaning and mystery! I love this:
'You are a wind listener aren't you?'
'Yes, I am, and you, you can hear the thoughts of many.'
and
Not only the wind but also the books told him what he had to know.
It was not that they had to prepare for a fight or rebellion, but the change was near. It would be brought to them no matter if they did fight or work for it.
Dark stuff, but beautifully written!
Thank you so much. It is hard for me to write in English also because there is no story line. I try to create a certain world by now and hope what my fingers type the reader will be able to understand and feel.
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Plotting can come later. Freewriting is about getting the flow going. Later, like a gold miner, you can sift for gold nuggets. They'll be there! A lyrical line will rise to the surface and sparkle; a character will grab your heart; a villain might make you wonder if there's good to found beneath the scheming and manipulating or whatever the villain is up to. If not a villain, the person who blocks the protagonist, does something to impede progress. It could be dear old dad who needs daughter to stay close to home. It could be the employer whose cafe will die without the heroine to keep it running. I.e., villains don't have to be bad. Just, they want so badly what the hero/heroine cannot deliver. Go, go, write whatever springs to mind, and worry later about how to make it a finished story!
Thanks for your great advice will save if!
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