Arnie this is soooo awesome! The storyline was very well written and well thought out! The transition of each scene was done very smoothly. But I love how everything was so unpredictable. Great job!
I was about to make my entry, but I realized that fiction is really not my forte. I will still try @maverickinvictus, but I don't know if I can produce something good! lol
Thank you, @chinitacharmer for appreciating my work. Didn't expect to get such wonderful feedback coming from someone that I also look up to when it comes to writing. :)
I bet you can do it. No harm in trying. :)