Half Hour Songwrite Challenge - Episode 3 - MOVE - 12/4/18 - A Dtube Exclusive!
Hello and welcome to the 3rd episode of HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE 😁
You can probably tell from the vid that I was feeling a little off when I made it. It was honestly kind of a rough day... I was trying so hard to be peppy when filming, but probably not succeeding very well. Things are much better now, but editing this footage down to something watchable was a little more challenging than usual. Even the song came out kind of sad...
Still, I had fun making today's episode, and it definitely helped pull me out of my funk. Writing always does 💛
HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE is an ongoing daily Dtube vlog. Each day I challenge myself to write a song in 30 minutes, using a one word prompt provided by a random word generator (https://wordcounter.net/random-word-generator). I'll also be considering viewer suggestions for prompts, so if you have something you'd like to hear me write a song about (or part of a song 😉), drop a comment below!
Today's random word is MOVE
Lyrics to today's song:
PIECES
She moves me
Her beauty
I love her to pieces
But she's already in pieces
She can't keep breaking apart
What if there's nothing left to put together
Nothing left of her heart?
So I stop breathing
Stop moving
Afraid to make a sound
Afraid to watch her break again
Afraid she won't come 'round
What if there's nothing left to put together
Nothing to be found?
Special thanks to @mariannewest and @freewritehouse for getting me hooked on freewrites in the first place ;)
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I could feel the emotion deep inside my soul, I think it just captured me, spell bound this is amazing.
Thank you so much @josediccus! I'm glad it was able to convey the emotion I felt.
If you'd like to vote for this song to be finished, tune in to my Saturday Half Hour Songwrite post :)
I'm kind of composer too😊😊, really your lyrics are just awseome 😍😍, your singing is of professional ones😊😊, just love your voice man😊😊
Oh thank you so much @freecrypto!
Do you have music posted on your blog? I'll have to check it out and see :)
If you'd like to vote for this song to be finished, tune in to my Saturday Half Hour Songwrite post :)
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OMG that was excellent, you'll have the run though that again with a clear head, I could tell you were clearly carrying a burden or ???
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Hi @wonderwop! Thank you so much :)
Yea, it was a rough day. Writing was therapeutic <3
If you'd like to vote for this song to be finished, tune in to my Saturday Half Hour Songwrite post :)
Hey I think that is the kernel of a good sad song.
Hi there @carlgnash! Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.
If you'd like to vote for this song to be finished, tune in to my Saturday Half Hour Songwrite post :)
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This sounds good dude ! I like it! You def gotta finish this bro
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Hey glad you like it @dmilliz! This one seems to be getting a lot of support :) Two more posts to go, tonight's and tomorrow's, before we pick the winning song fragment on Saturday. The winner will be fleshed out into a full song and posted on Sunday.
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