Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Nice story, it reads well and has a good introduction, body and conclusion.
In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
Good choice of screenshots, they really support the story.
Title can be improved, it is a bold claim for an app to be the first, I would be critical in copying that. Tags and category are good.
Tweet is okay, a bit too many tags for my taste.
State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🐲🐲🐲🐲
Thanks for the feedback, it is really helpful. And I would definitely make use of them in future tasks.
Thanks again @mids106