Steemit Openmic semana 114- Lento - Cancion Original (Original song) by @adolforivas42

in #openmic5 years ago (edited)


steemit-open-mic-week-114.png

Saludos amigos, acá mi participación en esta semana No. 114. Esta semana participando con una cancion original de mi autoria que se titula "Lento". Trata de relaciones amorosas que no terminan de funcionar porque en la pareja se interponen argumentos filosoficos, dicotómicos y hasta anacrónicos ocultando un vulgar miedo a que el amor libre fluya en pareja. Disfruten de esta cancion que es muy especial para mi.

Gracias por el apoyo que me han prestado todas estas semanas estimados steemians y colegas musicos. A los administradores y jueces de este concurso @luzcypher, @pfunk, @isaria, @ausbitbank, @verbal-d, @meno y a otros tantos muchisimas gracias por permitirnos ser felices compartiendo nuestra musica con todo el mundo./

Greetings friends, here is my participation in this week No. 114. This week I am participating with an original song of my authorship entitled "Slow". It is about romantic relationships that do not work at the end, because in the couple philosophical, dichotomous and even anachronistic arguments stands in the way, hiding a vulgar fear that free love flows in the couple. Enjoy this song that is very special for me.

Thank you for the support you have given me during all these weeks steemians and music colleagues. To the administrators and judges of this contest @luzcypher, @pfunk, @isaria, @ausbitbank, @ verbal-d, @meno and many others, thank you very much for allowing us to be happy sharing our music with everyone.

LENTO - Adolfo Rivas C

Puedo adivinar lo que tus ojos dicen
Sin tener que escuchar tus frases
Que condenan, tu secreto y mi secreto
Ya no mas mentiras, se que sangras por la herida
Y no vengas a decirme que lo nuestro es etéreo.

Cuando la filosofía nos separa del deseo...
Todo se nos va muriendo...
Cuando una dicotomía se hace parte de tu verbo
Como se consume el tiempo
Se nos va poniendo lento...

Estoy en modo fundamental
A falta de tus besos
Ya se aparto al corazón
Antologías marca el reloj
Cuentos que no existieron
Se alojo la sin razón y nos separó...

Quisiera decirte aquella frase tan perfecta
Y no soy un erudito
Pero lo único que entiendo es que te quiero
Cada movimiento sincroniza los segundos
Melodías sin recursos
Se deslizan suavemente cayendo en el hielo

Cuando las anacronías nos alejan de lo cierto...
Todo se nos va perdiendo...
Van tomando un rumbo incierto.
Cuando la monotonía se apodera de lo nuestro...
Como se consume el tiempo
Se nos va poniendo lento...

Estoy en modo fundamental...

English:

SLOW

I can guess what your eyes say
Without having to listen to your sentences
That condemn, your secret and my secret
No more lies, I know you are bleeding from the wound
And do not come and tell me that ours is ethereal.

When philosophy separates us from desire ...
Everything is dying ...
When a dichotomy becomes part of your verb
How time is consumed
It is getting slow ...

I'm in fundamental mode
In the absence of your kisses
I already turned to the heart
Anthologies marks the clock
Stories that did not exist
Stayed with us without reason, and make us broke...

I would like to tell you that perfect phrase
And I'm not a scholar
But the only thing I understand is that I love you
Each movement synchronizes the seconds
Melodies without resources
Glides smoothly falling on the ice

When the anachronisms take us away from the truth ...
Everything is getting lost ...
They are taking an uncertain course.
When monotony seizes what is ours ...
How time is consumed
It is getting slow ...

I'm in fundamental mode ...


▶️ DTube
▶️ IPFS
Sort:  

This post has been voted on from MSP3K courtesy of @isaria from the Minnow Support Project ( @minnowsupport ).

Bots Information:

Join the P.A.L. Discord | Check out MSPSteem | Listen to MSP-Waves

Thank you very much @isaria!, I really appreciate your support!.

Congratulations @adolforivas42! You have completed the following achievement on the Steem blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s) :

You made more than 300 upvotes. Your next target is to reach 400 upvotes.

Click here to view your Board of Honor
If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

Do not miss the last post from @steemitboard:

Saint Nicholas challenge for good boys and girls

You can upvote this notification to help all Steemit users. Learn why here!

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.30
TRX 0.12
JST 0.034
BTC 63750.99
ETH 3130.22
USDT 1.00
SBD 3.95