Steemit openmic week 52... Raahein ( Original song )

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hi.

Last week was really busy taking care of my parents so I did not get any time to upload a song. Today I had time so I have recorded a song. The song is in Hindi and talks about the roads that we travel through life metaphorically.

Thanks to @luzcypher and @pfunk for the contest.

Raahein.

Lyrics and translation:

Inhi raahon se tu aaya hai ( On the road of life you have come )

Inhi raahon se tu jaayega ( And on the same road you will go )

Kahaan gayi hain wo awaazein ( Where have all the voices gone )

Reh gayi hain tanhaaiyaan ( What remains is sheer loneliness )

Tanhaa zindagi ke mor pe ( All alone at the turn of your life )

Koi to hai jo aayega ( You look for someone to be there for you )

Khaamoshi ki sun le awaazein ( Listen to the sound of the silence }

Keh rahi ik dastaan ( It is telling you a story )

Chorus :
Phir koi karwaan sehra mein kho gaya ( There is a caravan that is lost in the desert)

Ret bhi dhoonde hai kadamon ke wo nishaan ( and the sand is trying to find the footsteps that you left behind )

Na ruke raastey na ruke ye jahaan ( But the road never stops for you and nor does the world. )

Bichar gaya tha lehron mein ( You were separated from your loved ones in the waves of the sea )

Dhoond raha tha kuch khwaabon mein ( And you were trying to find something special in your dreams )

Talaash thi ik manzar ki ( You were looking for the culmination and zenith of your dreams )

Duniya ki in raahon mein ( On the roads of this world that you travel in life )

Chorus :
Phir koi karwaan sehra mein kho gaya ( There is a caravan that is lost in the desert)

Ret bhi dhoonde hai kadamon ke wo nishaan ( and the sand is trying to find the footsteps that you left behind )

Na ruke raastey na ruke ye jahaan ( But the road never stops for you and nor does the world. )

I hope the meaning comes through in my translation.

Peace and love !!!

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Nice song. The video in background also looks very original.

Thank you Sanjay for listening and commenting.

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Bad ass as usual my friend!

Thank you

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Most beautiful n soulful song😍😍😍😍😍

Thank you Tisha :)

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Beautiful...Peace and Love to you too @atulmittal :) xoxo

Thank you for the appreciation and love.

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great visuals! I like your style x

Thank you

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Love the E-major to F-sharp main riff alongside the accompanying vocal melody during the verses... The chorus is equally impactful and complimentary... So very, very cool! Loved this...

Thank you for listening and commenting. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Cheers brother !!!

great to see that you came back , missed your songs ,
amazing start with that rock rhythm and whistle , great vocal brother and that chorus is just perfect , loved it . \m/ rock on !
peace :)

Thank you David for your kind words.

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Magical. Good luck!

Thank you :)

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