Steemit Open Mic Week 68 - Original: Nir Tsfaty - The Open Air
Hello guys,
My entry for this week's openmic is an original song, called The Open Air.
Much love to you all, have a beautiful week.
yours,
Nir
.
The open air/
Years are going by
I can feel it on my skin
I'm not who I used to be,
no more
The sun hits the field
exactly where we meet
First time in the open air
the open air
I fall in your eyes, I fall
Years are going by
I can feel it on my skin
Everything around is clear,
is clear
I'm glad I'm here with you
I'm glad I'm here with you
in the open air
I fall in your eyes, I fall
.
The Open Air by Nir Tsfaty(©2016)
Beautiful entry, Nir.
Thank you, dear @passion-ground!
Love your guitar figures here - I have a Takamine acoustic, too! I dig these evocative lyrics as well. I'm new to #openmic and I want to thank you for helping me to better understand the format and figure out what week it is :) Keep making your music, Nir! All blessings to you.
Thank you, dear @mightyjoenolan! welcome to openmic <3
best,
Nir
Thanks, Nir! I just uploaded my post. Think I did everything correctly :D
Cool :)
@nirtsfaty fantastic... goodluck
Thank you
Great sound friend. I enjoy it.
Thank you, dear friend @digitalopus!
Have a good week :)
Thank you, dear @Luzcypher! <3
another great song my friend ! you sure have a talent for songwriting! so soft and engaging , loved the guitar motif throughout the whole tune . And some cool soft falsetto vocal lines ! loved it! cheers !
Thank you, @pechiche! <3