Steemit OpenMic Week 85 /Moving On/ Original song .... featuring @Pechichemena

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)


This is my first entry for openmic with an original song. The production part, guitar and lyrics are done by @pechichemena based on a old draft i had, that was made for me by a producer friend of mine from Croatia, S.I.
I just made up the instrumental part and the melody. haha

Hope you enjoy it. Who knows, maybe i make something else in the future. :D

Lyrics:

A:

Walking slowly down this lane
Counting out the steps that matter
I Wash my teardrops in the rain
and bring my sorrows down this ladder

Chorus:

Wings will vanish in the dust
Carrying those who now are lost
and today the wheel will turn
On and on.

Winds will take you through the maze
Fear will vanish in the haze
On this wheel that never stops
And it turns
On and on.

A2:

Walking lonely through this road
Counting out the steps that matter
The leaves of sadness
start to fall
and wither like
A fallen rose.

🌟Keep on Steeming!🌟

Some of my music videos:

Frank Sinatra: My Way
https://steemit.com/music/@silentscreamer/4x49rtoa
Elton John: Can you feel the love tonight (Lion King soundtrack)
https://steemit.com/music/@silentscreamer/g1m7orxk
Enya: May it be (LOTR soundtrack)
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/962n3z6d
Pirates of the Caribbean soundtrack (Hoist the colors and Main theme)
https://steemit.com/music/@silentscreamer/231nc0ms
I dreamed a dream from Les Miserables
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/ggk5xq72
The Minnowsupport Lullaby
https://steemit.com/minnowsupportproject/@silentscreamer/yi7zsm7r
Schindlers List Theme
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/steemit-openmic-week-75-or-theme-from-schindler-s-list-or
Sam Smith: "Im not the only one"
https://steemit.com/blockmountain/@silentscreamer/block-mountain-submission-or-sma-smith-i-m-not-the-only-one-or
Meno/Pechichemena: "Wait" cover
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/3ht644ns
Whitney Houston: "I have nothing"
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/w7vcd5wc
Beyonce: "Listen"
https://steemit.com/openmic/@silentscreamer/znifwtme
Cee Lo Green: "Forget you"
https://steemit.com/onelovedtube/@silentscreamer/rdb4mn6h

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Scream on silently, babydoll! This is awesome, girlfriend! Hat's off to both you and Pehcich in kind for a truly awesome entry! Love this!

Haha. Thank you. Well its Pechi who molded it all into something presentable so i take my hats off to him. 😁

I came here for the free hats :p ! thank you @passion-ground for your comment , this was very fun to make! and I'm really happy you liked it brother ! @silentscreamer was the brain master of this collab :) , I just tagged along! Cheers!

Great job! I like it! You have a very pretty voice and wonderful talent. I always like to hear new songs and appreciate that you have shared this one :)
Ivy

Thank you Socent. The song was in my drawer for months. Finally Pechi helped me finish it. :)

Pechi is pretty awesome! Glad you finished it!
Ivy

do i get a cookie?

Of course you get all the cookies! But only just this once lol. Next time you have to share ;)

This is great! Just wanted to pop by and say so~ Staying tuned!

Thx for popping by. Haha

Completely awesome! I love your work, please keep them coming.

nom nom nom. :D
Haha. I will. Thank you ;)

You just continue to amaze me. Just an incredible piece of music that was lying in a drawer. A beautiful collaboration to be certain.

Thanks for sharing this, I appreciate it beyond words.

As long as people like it, ill continue making it. :D

This is awesome 👏 👏👏You guys make an amazing team. So many great talents came together here here ❤️ And I hope all the love motivates you to make more originals because we clearly all love it.

Thank you very much @lillywilton :). I'm always up for music collaborations btw , i love to do production work and specially now through the originals shared here on Steemit...soo... wink , wink

YAS!! Let's do it!!

Great melody - your fiddle playing is very tasteful too. Some vocal harmony would really make it pop tastic!

Thank you Cam. :)
Yeah i hear what you mean. Maybe in a non live version. hehe

Amazing talent! What a voice!

Beautiful entry and collaboration. Congrats both.
You sing beautifully as always, and it is sort of sad but carchy, my fav ones. good luck with your first original . All the best.

Thank you Yidneth. Ive no idea how this will go. 😂. Ill be happy if one judge likes it. Completely new area for me. Scary and exciting at the same time.

Well, what is important is that you like it :).
Exciting scary sounds like a thrill and thrill is good :) Go for it :)!
sounds great!

Everything is a thrill here. Hope that never changes. 😁❤

I'm not sure I have words. WOW!!! This was absolutely phenomenal. So much talent.

Thank you Bronco. :)
How do you call a Bronco fan anyway? hehe.
Broncomian? :D

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