Dreamin' - An Original Rhyme by Another Poet

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

Chorus:

If I'm dreaming... please don't wake me up... please don't wake me up. (2x)

Verse:

ITS WHITE CLOUDS AND BLUE SKIES SHES GOT LONG BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES AND WHEN I MET HER I KNEW SHED BE MINE AND WHEN WE MET FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME THERE WAS NO DOUBT IN MY MIND THAT SHE WAS FINE ITS JUST THE WAY IT GOES WHEN YOU MEET THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE THROUGH THICK AND THIN THROUGH BAD DAYS AND GOOD DAYS SCRAPIN BY BUT AT LEAST YOU GOT YOUR FRIEND

DOESN’T LIFE SEEM A LITTLE BIT BETTER WHEN YOU GOT THAT SPECIAL SOMEONE TO HOLD YOUR HAND THINK BACK TO WHEN WE FIRST MET THAT EYE CONTACT WAS MADE FOLLOWED BY A DEEP BREATH AT DINNER WHEN WE SHARED THOSE AWKWARD LAUGHS IM BETTIN MOST YOUNG LOVERS HAVE A STORY LIKE THAT AND AS TIME GOES BY IM STILL GRATEFUL TO HAVE YOU IN MY LIFE

ALL THE WAY THROUGH THOSE LONG DAYS AND THOSE COLD NIGHTS EVEN WHEN WE FIGHT I JUST THINK BACK AND REMEMBER ALL THOSE OTHER TIMES THAT YOU BROUGHT ME PLEASURE ITS COMMON GROUND THATLL HOLD US TOGETHER

SO THERE YA GO FOLKS JUST ANOTHER LOVE SONG FOR THE RESTLESS YOUTH AND THE OLD BLOKES WHETHER ITS EAST OR WEST COAST BEIJING OR SAN DIEGO FOR PEOPLE MAKING THOSE RUPEES DENIRO AND PESOS WITH LOVE IN THE HEART THERE'S NO WAY TO LET THE DAY GO TO WASTE SO THAT’S ALL FOLKS THAT’S ALL SHE WROTE BUT WE’LL SEE CAUSE EACH DAY HAS A NEW PAGE

Chorus:

IF IM DREAMIN, PLEASE DON’T WAKE ME UP, PLEASE DON’T WAKE ME UP (2X)

Author's Notes

This is a short song I wrote and performed for a small solo project. I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!

Thanks,
Another Poet

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