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RE: zoho's World Of Anything : 2019/05/10 14:34:41

in #poem5 years ago (edited)

Where is the poem? All I see is prose.

I've tried to work out how you imagined it poem, what you felt was the flow, so this is only as I imagine it:

Lastly the nighttide came
when the trek to stay cramped in a cell
was more agonizing than
the adventure it took to recognize the lies.

Also, please move the link attached to the poem to a couple of lines further down.

A question, why do you repeat your tabs within your article? Is it because of Twitter?

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