you said when someone is beside you,
the tall grass of life
cannot obscure or hide you,
a boat set out for derelict sailing
comes before so fine a guest,
having set out on a fool's errand raiding
your own
treasure chest,
I think that is my favorite part of it. I have read it over about three times now and I am still trying to flip around in my head what the meaning might be. There is something about it that is just sticking in my head though. Nice poem!