Nightmare - Some Words That Rhyme

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

My youngest woke me from a deep sleep last night. She was scared. I was tired. So that we both could get some rest, I laid down beside her, planning to only be there for a moment.

My eyes closed and then I drifted off. When I woke, it was already morning. And I was still tired.

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Rhyming Words

Will you awake me, little child, in the dead of the night?
Will the bad men visit you in your dreams?
Will fear crept into your innocent mind?
I promise, dear child, it not as it seems.

Will you wake me from my quiet slumber?
Will your voice be calm or will you scream?
Will I be able to calm the terror?
Hush, my child, it's just a dream.

I'll offer you hugs, soft words, and prayers.
I will lay by your side as you drift away.
Close your eyes. Embrace the slumber.
Leave nightmares. Sweet dreams, please stay.

@SumatraNate

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What a nice poem. I must be too used to @honeydue's writing, because I expected a twist that would have been scary... like the child's nightmare becoming real and you getting stuck in it while you sleep or something.

@improv, your comment made me chuckle. Since this was based on a real-life experience, I wanted to keep it as calm as possible, because I hope my wife and I can help my child overcome the fear.

I wrote a poem a while back that was a bit darker (at least by my standards). Feel free to check it out.
https://steemit.com/poem/@sumatranate/ode-to-alice-poetic-imagery

I appreciate you stopping by. See you around.

This is so soothing. If you would whisper this to her, It will be like a sweet lullaby. I feel a parent's love through this poem. Wonderful :)

That is a wonderful idea. I am so glad you feel my love towards my kiddos. And even more importantly I want them to feel it directly from me.

Thanks for your comment. Have a blessed day!

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very beautiful poem! i like it!

Thanks for the kind words.

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