ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 26)
Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, this is a short verse which is designed for readers to 'sing-a-long'.
The background music I wrote it to has been embedded below. I dare you to give it a shot!
I really hope readers enjoy these and let me know what they think about them.
Yah...
Keep it on the 24/7 hustle.
If you're ready for the rumble, might just mingle with some trouble.
Don't get caught... Watch it all burst like a bubble...
Just keep it all in order so it don't look like a muddle.
Who knows which way to go and is this the right shuttle.
Supplement those activities and flex a bit of muscle put a bit of elbow grease in just to keep it on the level.
If you staying on the mission still lookin for a double or a triple said to me it looks so simple.
My love for hip hop has just been rekindled.
Disconnect from the world cause I'd rather be single.
Looking at me like a stranger so I guess its time to mingle.
Keep it fresh and crisp like a big bowl'a'pringles.
And your keepin' up with game so you must've learned the lingo.
Or ya stuck in Mexico nowhere to go like a sad gringo.
I'm just keeping it real like my name was Ringo crossing bars off like its a game of bingo.
Want to sing along?
This piece was very fun to create. It just came so easily and really was a lot of fun to perform. Give it a try yourself and see if you can find a nice cadence for it.
No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about these, what you liked or didn't like, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
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I don't know why I imagined this short piece with another music, another rhythm. Maybe some rap, hip hop. Something more street. The loose verses, with no connection to each other, give the idea of a collage of images, as if people could see the street, the environment, but also inside themselves. Greetings, @zentalk
Yah, I just write what comes to me in exercises like these... Funny how music can inspire us...
Hello, @zentalk. I think the hustle, the bustle and the game (sound and verbal) are well captured in your composition. Expresar la cotidianidad, la calle y nuestras emociones frente a ellas siempre Expressing everyday life, the street and our emotions in front of them will always be a creative challenge.
Thanks, happy you enjoyed the composition. This one is pretty smooth compared to others.
Yeah, it was fun reading it. There's a lot of rhythmic play.
Experimenting with word games and rhythm are two of the funniest tasks of creating with language. Although there is also a lot of reflection, as in any game of this type that has a background, because it does not lack purpose, although it seems only to swing happily on the music: I see disagreement with everything we must give up to stay in the social game.
As always, @zentalk, I was delighted to see you through this @adsactly window.
@adsactly Nice poetry and Good to read lyrics
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I just comment with this word. I hope you accept it.
Go to the jungle to find a way to survive
you'll struggle to hold your life
do not complain, whatever happens
face all the pain, you find your heaven
do not be sad, we live in a world
do not cry, talk about only one word
your heart will be happy, then all be cheerful
live together, then all became beautiful
Thank you @zentalk
thank you @adsactly
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