succint scent...bacus15 (48)in #poetry • 6 years ago succint scent could be sent to nose but noise widen we then laugh Poem by Bacus15 Photo from Pixabay #philosophy #metaphor #writing #creativity
I really enjoy the flow of this piece, and the turn. ;)
Thank you. Without the turn entire piece would be stucked, sort of :) ;) .
Lovely. For me, it flowed better read this way:
Yes, probably it would be viable option of leading it as well. My intention was there to give separate units of sounds and meanings grouped together. Glad to see you back. Thank you :) .
Thanks. I had a bit of a relapse, but nothing as serious as my recent medical crisis. I’m not fully back up to speed, but I’m getting there.
I am sending you my good thoughts, and poetic vibes :) .