On The Roofs of Love

dobartim (83)in #poetry • 6 years ago

First kiss and flicker of energy in my stomach, I was left breathless when she touched me with kundalini vibration. In love and mistakes, love and illusion, we create wrong relationships with excellent partners, or we make mistakes in prophetic destinies.
Our childhood passes through the years as it opens up a new experience in the direction that always passes by us. Are you happy or you are living in the illusion of happiness that has remained in the memory of the wrong decision, where the moral codes of truth are gone?
Beauty and passion raise value in the eyes of the cowboy, the Indians have tamed the animals in the military camps of the oasis. Lying pose as truth and lasting love in the dirty dust, look a little further and you will see great delusions about the greed and incompetence of other people.
Climb to the roof of honour and true character, love is deeper than ordinary thoughts, love creates worlds of pure emotions. You are the princess who sleeps in my dreams, you love above the boundaries of the average that offers me the right energy of enthusiasm and joy.

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kantos (62) 6 years ago

En esta oportunidad deseo comentar las siguientes frases:

Nuestra infancia pasa a través de los años, abriendo una nueva experiencia en la dirección que siempre pasa por nosotros.

Posicionándose como la verdad y el amor duradero en el polvo sucio, miren un poco más lejos y verán grandes delirios sobre la avaricia y la incompetencia de otras personas.

Sube al techo del honor y del verdadero carácter, el amor es más profundo que los pensamientos ordinarios, el amor crea mundos de emociones puras.

Puedo opinar respecto a este bello poema que desde que nacemos comenzamos a adquirir experiencias, buena y malas, siempre serán aprendizaje y eso se valora. El amor es la mayor virtud del ser humano y debe ir de la mano con el honor y la lealtad, si tenemos bien plantados los valores, no habrá avaricia que pueda con ellos. El éxito siempre estará de nuestro lado.

This time comment the following sentences:

Our childhood passes through the years, opening a new experience in the direction that always passes through us.

Positioning yourself as truth and enduring love in the dirty dust, look a little further and you will see great delusions about other people's greed and incompetence.

Go to the roof of honor and true character, love is deeper than ordinary thoughts, love creates worlds of pure emotions.

I can give my opinion about this beautiful poem that from the moment we are born we begin to acquire experiences, good and bad, they will always be learning and that is valued.
Love is the greatest virtue of the human being and must go hand in hand with honor and loyalty, if we have values well planted, there will be no greed that can overcome them.
Success will always be on our side @dobartim.

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dobartim (83) 6 years ago

Hola Amigos

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simplicitytech (54) 6 years ago (edited)

Nice one sir

Climb to the roof of honour and true character, love is deeper than ordinary thoughts, love creates worlds of pure emotions. You are the princess who sleeps in my dreams, you love above the boundaries of the average that offers me the right energy of enthusiasm and joy.

The pureness of it got me thinking and i decided to add my mine below

On the top horn of a mountain goat, i feel comfortable with your love. When old memories of love can not be erased, dont be afraid to create anew one. We bask in the sun and dance in the rain of Love

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