A soul trapped in the darkness

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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A lonely battered soul
Walking through the forest of pain
Battered, broken, tattered torn
The soul walks a desolate world looking forlorn

It walks dragging the pain of defeat behind
Understanding desolation like none of it's kind
It moves all around, crawls painfully around
Knowing fully well that all is behind

Although achievements come slowly to it
Failure, a stranger is it to him
The things it craves, sometimes, far away are they from him
And it's aspirations require hard work for closure.

At the end, fate's smile is the wait
But ever so slow is the wait...
The wait for fate to deliver on it's pregnant promises
The clock ticks and the soul waits.

The beginning of the darkness ever so bright
It's light now lost at the end of a bright tunnel
The beginning once more seems like and end
For even the stories of woe might have an end.

Quick analysis

This is just a reflection of how some people feel out of place in this world. The world has its ups and down and for those who truly want something so beautiful, they are patient enought to wait till the end.

Patience and genuine kindness are virtures required, loving others the way we love ourselves is also needed as the measure of love we give out is the same measure we truly feel for ourselves.



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The poem is nice and beautifully arranged. I have learnt from this. Thanks

Great poem @ehiboss
Your analysis makes me understand the poem more further. There are three key words there : patience, kindness and love.
This 3 things is what always guide us to treat others the same way we can treat ourselves.

Thanks @ehiboss for this wonderful poem

I enjoyed the analysis given.
Yes it is true that patience, kindness and love are important virtues needed to beautify the world

Nice and touching poem

Nice poem @ehiboss. The analysis also made it very easy to understand.

So many people feel so out of place in this world, this is because they haven't embrace their true self. Once we love who we are, then it becomes much more easier to love others.
And the more value we add to others the better our lives become.

It's just a simple principleof life

This hit me like hard. So true for me

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