Displaced thoughts

in #poetry5 years ago

DISPLACED THOUGHTS

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Sometimes our thoughts are too loud
Ever resounding from the start of things
Echoing through the passage of infinity
Moving with levity, scaring off the ever curious sea gulls

Then there's the sea, the calm blue sea
A walk on the sand, can cool ones thoughts
Or ignite it up a thought for a thought

And also there's the sky
So far so bright, sublime to the eyes

The forms created in the mind, are free once more
they roam, they move, to multiply like the stars

Yet another look at the desert, triggers the thoughts reserve
The dry vast nothingness, unleash torrents of thoughts that keeps the mind forever at bay. Only a millennium of thinking does the job.

Yet the nerves isn't calm, feels like nothing has been achieved,
A disturbed heart yearns

For salvation from displaced thoughts.

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DIVING DEEP

As usual there's not gonna be much talk on this I'll just be explaining it a little.

It's about thinking and soliloquizing, the pain it brings when that is done and where it can be done a little bit faster and greater.

The first stanza talks about how people think and wind away all their time, first of most people do this at the beach by the sea, as the cool breeze makes them think faster.


The second part talks about the sky. It's true that most people also think well when staring into a night or day sky, it clears their nerves and provides inner peace.


Now the last part. When I used the desert i didn't just mean the vast dry land, I mean the dangers humans face normally open their eyes and mind to more thinking, so here's the vast dry desert signifies danger.


In all its seen that no matter how deep we go in our thoughts, they're just thoughts and thus can never end.

my quill bleeds

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