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RE: Arboreal collapse

in #poetry6 years ago

Attractive, yet ominous. "Minatory"; I like that word. Like all your poems, this one challenges not only our knowledge of the language, but also our interpretation skills. A perfunctory reading, like this emboldened forest, only provides glimpses of the mixed feelings produced by being enraptured by beauty divine, but also fierce.

The barriers build by the taproots sending the warning messages, and yet the apparent impenetrability is always challenged by the tiniest, craziest dewdrops that kiss and join evening and morning in an ever present state of collapsing luminescence.

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When one is a lover of poetry, the verse comes out only while it is inspired by life and everything that surrounds us with each word that comes out of its mouth will be inspiring for those around you. Poetry can be complicated when interpreted by a master of poetry, his words are deeper in the poetic sense, but if he pays attention he will understand its meaning and you already have it.

Thanks, @bidbots. Very encouraging. Trying to keep the connection with life/nature and all that is beautiful in it. Only way to avoid a collapse in this suffocating world.

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