Hi there.
Good poem. Made me think about distasteful medicines; things we don't like, but we must take sometimes.
Truth be told, some people cry more than others. I guess some have more reasons to; others develop mechanisms to turn sadness into at least a neutral gray, i guess; still others find ways to turn happy moments into frustrating chaos and then cry.
I think that not all crying becomes an internal hemorrhage, though. Some crying can be liberating, even therapeutic. Crying may be the first step towards healing and moving on.
Thank you so much for reading this. I really appreciate your comment. I write this because sometimes I feel like I want to cry, and I just can't. So, with these lines I'm letting go all the tears I keep inside.
And that's a good thing. Writing, like crying, can also be therapeutic. Any writer will agree with that.
Keep doing it; keep exploring and I'm sure you'll find a voice that will be greater, more powerful than the sum of all your pains.
I'll agree with you. I'll keep writing. Thank you :)
@snowy-june,
I was pleased to discover that you are a fellow poet (Followed). BTW, @hlezama is the best literary critic on the blockchain. You are fortunate to have attracted his attention and commentary. He is a fellow Venezuelan who speaks impeccable English and, I suspect, impeccable Spanish.
Thanks again for the Poll Vote. It means a lot.
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