Poem: Haiku - Summer Nights

jocelynlily (52)in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

Flushed green leaves sway warm
on nights with your hot touch firm
on skin, when out, home.

#romance #erotica #sex #imagism

6 years ago in #poetry by jocelynlily (52)

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bacus15 (48) 6 years ago

Yes, it would crash haiku structure, but would not it be better with "home" in separate verse?

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